Monday, May 27, 2013

The first love!

Rahul was Seema's first love but they didn't succeed. Now Seema is married to Vinay and has 2 kids. Rahul returned from the U.S.A. and wants to meet Seema at any cost!

"I am in your city. Want to meet me?" asked Rahul. 

 “What if Vinay knows?"

"There is no need to tell him”

 “I am just scared Rahul!”

 “It is your call now Seema. I am staying in Hotel Marriott!”

Next day as Rahul was sipping tea in the lobby Seema walked to him in a red sari.

Her beauty and charm only increased with years”, thought Rahul earnestly.
Image source -"first love"

100 Words On Saturday
This piece is written for 100 Words On Saturday 11 Prompt: YOUR CALL hosted by Corinne at her blog EveryDayGyaan 


  1. I wish I could read the rest of the story, Afshan! :D Nice response to the prompt!
    Cheers! Vidya

    1. Thanks VIdya:)
      may be some day I will continue it ;)

  2. C'mon Afshan, continue with this story... please :)

  3. The story line is so plausible - want to know how it ends. Give us more, please, Afshan.

    1. will try to continue in the forthcoming prompts . Plan them accordingly - they shud fit my story line . LOL !

  4. Ok... so she went to meet him...
    This is one story which demands a sequel!
    Good one for the prompt, Afshan!

  5. ...waiting for a sequel like others...let's see how it ends!

  6. Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

  7. @Shilpa , Kajal , Smita : shall think on it. LOL

  8. This is such a conflict between emotion and reality! Yes, definitely go for a sequel!

  9. With out doubt a sequel is required . The quotation ,"being someones first love may be great,but to be their last is perfect" sums up the story.

  10. oh..and then what happened? i so so wanna know.

  11. Waiting for part 2 Afshan - curious now on how this ends.


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