Rahul was Seema's first love but they didn't succeed. Now Seema is
married to Vinay and has 2 kids. Rahul returned from the U.S.A. and wants to
meet Seema at any cost!
"I am in your city. Want to meet me?" asked Rahul.
“What if Vinay knows?"
"There is no need to tell him”
“I am just scared Rahul!”
“It is your call now Seema.
I am staying in Hotel Marriott!”
Next day as Rahul was sipping tea in the lobby Seema walked to him
in a red sari.
“Her beauty and charm only
increased with years”, thought Rahul earnestly.
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| Image source -"first love" |
This piece is written for 100 Words On Saturday 11 Prompt: YOUR CALL hosted by Corinne at her blog EveryDayGyaan
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I wish I could read the rest of the story, Afshan! :D Nice response to the prompt!
ReplyDeleteCheers! Vidya
Thanks VIdya:)
Deletemay be some day I will continue it ;)
C'mon Afshan, continue with this story... please :)
ReplyDeletehehe !
Deleteall in good time Bhavya XOX
The story line is so plausible - want to know how it ends. Give us more, please, Afshan.
ReplyDeletewill try to continue in the forthcoming prompts . Plan them accordingly - they shud fit my story line . LOL !
DeleteOk... so she went to meet him...
ReplyDeleteThis is one story which demands a sequel!
Good one for the prompt, Afshan!
...waiting for a sequel like others...let's see how it ends!
ReplyDeleteSequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
ReplyDelete@Shilpa , Kajal , Smita : shall think on it. LOL
ReplyDelete:-) with others on this.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a conflict between emotion and reality! Yes, definitely go for a sequel!
ReplyDeleteWith out doubt a sequel is required . The quotation ,"being someones first love may be great,but to be their last is perfect" sums up the story.
ReplyDeleteoh..and then what happened? i so so wanna know.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for part 2 Afshan - curious now on how this ends.
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