Julie
is getting married today! A bride's expression is equal to a Nobel Prize winner’s
but Julie was all gloomy. Rehan loved Julie immensely. He was ready to
sacrifice anything and everything for her. "My son in-law should be a born
Christian who is baptized. If you think of taking a bold step you will see all
our dead faces," warned Julie's dad. She requested Rehan to forget
her. As she got dressed in the bridal frock she wondered why his memories are
getting stronger with every passing second. She hugged the dark secret to take
it to her grave!
This is in response to 100 words on Saturday prompt by Everyday Gyaan
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Now that's really a dark secret, Afshan. Great story line.
ReplyDeleteYep it is. Thanks Corinne
DeleteHahaha...this must be the shortest story you have written Afshan. Good one though.
ReplyDeleteI second Janaki :)
DeleteInteresting story, Afshan! Hope her secret remains a secret always!
ReplyDeleteThis might seem like a pretty old story. But this happens in today's time and age too. Sad but true. :(
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Happens all the time in reality. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteShort but interesting Afshan.
ReplyDeletejanaki : Ya true but there r more shorter stories actually :) Thanks
ReplyDeleteShilpa :) Ya we can hope for that !
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Jyothi : Ya its a scene u can witness any age any day
Suzy : True !
Alka : thanks alka :)
Nice story, Afshan :)
ReplyDeleteinteresting story!
ReplyDelete:) Hope she will make peace with her present and move on in life :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I hope she finds some joy in her gloom
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@Rainbow Hues : Thank U
ReplyDelete@Patrickoscheen : Thanks
@Sridevi: Yep she has to :) Thanks
@Bhagyashree : She has to find joy to live ! THanks