I love poems as they can be instantly felt. For today I am sharing a poem I wrote years back. It may sound silly as I was veryyyy young when I wrote this ;)
Are you in Love??
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Are you in Love??
When everything around you starts seeming bright
When you feel what all you do is right
When you feel in your eyes a sparkle of light
When you feel everything is colorful,yet you lose your sight!
Is that Love?!
When you feel all alone in a group
When you feel active only when he is in loop
That every second you miss him
That every second you look at him
Is that love?!
When you try getting his attention
When you speak with pretension
When he says it is wrong,your pursuit to rectify
When his single glance makes you petrify!
Are you in love?!
The pain you feel when he is away
The joy you feel when he comes and you sway
The colorful dressing and the concentration on looks
You always want to get in to his good books!
Are you in love?!
Why do you smile so much hiding your shiver?
Will you suppress your feelings and bear the pain forever?
How can you hide so long, the fervor!?
You need to tell him. It is now or never!
You are indeed in love!
Many say love is the mind’s play
Makes you mad, makes you happy and makes you fray!
I say, love is the music of the heart
It shows dreams and plays loud with every single beat!
“Yes. You are in Love!”
Prathima Rao teaches a new word - Onomatopoeia
Shinjini - An ode to an ordinary life
Ghata's Opulence
Shail's On a Rainy Day
Some cool blogs I discovered yesterday.
http://nopageleftblank.wordpress.com/
http://nanaprah.blogspot.in/
This is my 16th post for A to Z challenge 2014
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This is beautiful birthday girl, If you wrote this years back..wow!! I love the last stanza!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sfurti :)
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Everything is fair in love and war...so anything happens in love and everything happens in love...Happy Birthday Afshan!
ReplyDelete:) :) Thanks Prudhvi
DeleteAppreciate ur time here....
Very nice! You were always good at poetry!
ReplyDeleteThanks Roshni :) for the appreciation
DeleteYou express so beautifully ! nice read !
ReplyDeleteThanks Ananya
DeleteVery sweet and romantic. Love is truly the music of the heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzy :)
DeleteThanks for liking it
Overflowing with love !
ReplyDelete:) thanks for ur time Vasudha
DeleteHey Afshan, that's a cute poem :) Thanks for featuring my blog. Much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteThanks Prathima for liking it :) !
DeleteHappy B'day first of all and this is a wonderful poem and yes I'm in love too :)
ReplyDeleteP for Petrified-Random Thoughts Naba
Thanks for the wishes :) and thanks for liking the poem
DeleteArre waah...such a sweet poem. And I can only admire poetry, never make one. Happy birthday girl. And yeah, thanks for featuring me :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ghata...
Deletethanks for the complis
I love this and you wrote this straight from real feelings--that is wonderful. I can tell! It has a lovely dancelike rythym to it! :) jean
ReplyDeleteThanks Jean
ReplyDeletealways appreciate your compliments. they make me feel good
Aww...young love is always special, isn't it? :)
ReplyDeleteInspired by love on your b'day? :D The many aspects and proofs of love....
ReplyDeleteYou are not only a gifted writer, but a gifted poet as well! Nice work!
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