Wednesday, August 18, 2010

The Final Destination!!


Whenever LIFE brings me near to you,
I can always see my Dreams come true!
The journey of heart is filled with fragrance,
The heart jumps with joy and my soul wants to Dance!!
Your voice makes the time fly so soon!
The earth seems to be better than the skies and the Moon!!
Thy memories make me glad and also sad,
Lost in thoughts I go Mad!
I wake up in the mid of the night,
There’s no one to share all this plight!!

Every moment now the same thought troubles me!
Is all this temporary the LOVE, Joy and the glee?
With this fear in my heart I ran far from you in to a void!
What all I was left with was Me a more Paranoid!
With these rippling thoughts in my mind one day my fear overpowered,
The fragrance melt and the blossom withered!
Piercing my eyes are the dreams shattered.
“Oh Dear Life! Is this the final destination?”
Why should every relation end in Separation?
Can anyone crack the mysterious puzzle of love?
There’s a saying “You reap what you sow!”
Love is an exception You sow and it doesn’t Last!!
Why should my words always refer to the past?
Your voice once MADE the time fly so soon!
The earth SEEMED to be better than the skies and the Moon!!”
-----By afshan---- 


  1. A Rhymming Destination.. Good Work..

    I wish you a good luck for the contest, SSC - II

    --Someone Is Special--

  2. Afsan , this si really a beautiful poem . Two lines which just left m,e spellbound -
    Piercing my eyes are the dreams shattered ,(and)
    Love is an exception You sow and it doesn’t Last!!
    Hats off !!

  3. @adreamygal
    Thanks a bunch!!!

    @someoneSpecial : THANKS

  4. really b'ful post.. y do i feel you top urself wit every write-up ? :). Keep it up.

  5. very nicely composed
    i got a warm fuzzy feel after reading it
    ATB for SSC2 :)

  6. Joy is ephemeral... thats the tragedy... beautiful post...
    all the best for ssc and do check out my post as well

  7. @gkam : Thanks and good luck to u too dear

  8. @Worthless rantings :)---I cudnt find ur post link...there were many blogs when i visited ur gimme the link!

  9. @Afshan:Awesome peotry re...really heart touching...!!

  10. Hey! very nice poem.... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwSOME...............

  11. @nani :Thanks !
    @Mahfooz : thanks for visiting and following my blog:) U Are a seasoned and versatile writer i guess...and that too hindi me
    will take time for sure to read them

  12. Beautiful thoughts...Awesome poetry..:)

  13. There’s a saying “You reap what you sow!”

    Love is an exception You sow and it doesn’t Last!!

    wonderfully said.. !!

  14. good one..very beautifully written!!

  15. @Panshul :yep they r my fav lines too
    @sri : Thanks

  16. The pain of shattered dreams, the Questions that one asks life in such moments of depression
    Yes, a dream shattered is an identity lost!
    Portrayed so well in words...

  17. @Tuppence : Thanks for the appraisal

  18. Good One.... :) I knew you write very well... Never knew there is a poetess hidden inside you....
    Very well done.

  19. hey
    really ramya !!
    i thought u always used to read my poems in office ;)
    anyway THANKS

  20. Hi

    I had tagged you, visit the tag here

    --Someone Is Special--

  21. Hey mayank!:)
    u forgot that u already read and commented :)


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