Sunday, May 5, 2013

Voices in my head!


“I can never calm them down. Other than me no one can hear them but they are actually nerve racking sometimes. They are soothing, disturbing and many a times they are just an incoherent buzz. From dawn to dusk they talk to me punctuated by the hum of the washing machine, beeps of oven , whistles of cooker, distant loud chatter and laughs and so on so forth. They guide me, misguide me, tickle me, bring a frown on my face but never leave my head. When I sleep I may be in smiles but my voices always travel miles”.


This is written for"100 words prompt on Saturday" by Corinne.
100 Words On Saturday

19 comments:

  1. That's a good one, Afshan! True, nobody can hear our voices in the head but they are forever there... creating a cacophony of thoughts!
    Very apt comic strip!

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    1. Thanks Shilpa for caring to read :) ya cacophony remains till we die . SIGH !!!
      I loved the comic too

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  2. Haha...nice take on the prompt, Afshan! We sometimes all wish to shut off those voices in our head!

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    1. and I can rarely shut them off
      thanks for dropping by ! Great prompt corinne

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  3. Loved the cartoon strip. Do you converse with the voices in your head? :)

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    1. All the time Shail and some times I succeed in shutting their mouths too

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  4. I love that one, and the comic strip is so funny! :)

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  5. Very good one Afshan and so darn true. Those voices are half responsible for the wreck that I am not :D

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    1. haha
      Those voices r fully responsible for the wreck I am ::( We r two opp poles ;)

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  6. I really liked what you have written. Sometimes the buzzing is too irritating to ignore.

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    1. Thanks Amit YA SOMETIMES I literally close my ears :D as if it would stop them * zyada filmy hogaya na :P *

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  7. Afshan, you're so correct. Many times, I get lost, talking to myself. At times I wish I could shut them up, and not confuse me; but at the other times, I'm happy that they're there :)

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  8. Ah, so beautiful! Me likey likey! I hear voices in my head too :D all.the.time.

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  9. its nice to have company! ;)
    That I'm not the only one with voices in my head!! :D
    and they have such interesting conversations! :P

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  10. @Bhavzz : Really U can neither love or hate those voices all the time and they never cease

    @Nandana : Thanks dear

    @Pixie : Interesting or not interesting they r immortal :P

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  11. Nice post, Afshan...my voices keep me alive and kicking!!

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  12. Good post, Afshan! yes voices all over us surround and guide or misguide us!

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  13. Yes those voices - they never leave us alone - but now and then they give us a few pearls of wisdom.

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