Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Smile is not always a curve which sets things straight :-)

It got awkward when Reshma was introduced to Sahil. She already knows him but had to exchange the pleasantries like she met him for the first time. To add to the awkwardness Ajay left her with Sahil as he got a phone call.

Sahil: "Hmm. So you seem very happy?"

 
Reshma: "Of course. Ajay is a good man but I have not embraced life the way you did. I didn't climb the success ladder forgetting past so fast!"
 
Sahil smiled. The shadow of his smile held so many questions, answers and emotions but it was disrupted as Ajay came back.


Written for Saturday’s 100 words prompt on Write Tribe.
100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

27 comments:

  1. Huh! You cannot leave a reader at a cliff like that :(

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    1. I will hold u wen u r at the edge of cliff ;) hehe bad joke
      Ya 100 words me itna hi hosaka :P

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    2. Thanku for not letting my fall :) <3

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    3. ooopsie.. I meant letting me fall :P

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  2. Oh!! Why did Ajay came back so early!!
    Good one, Afshan! Liked it! :)

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    1. ya if only some one stopped him we wud hav known more :)
      thanks shilpa

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  3. Liked it... hope she recreates her new world carefully

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  4. Wish Ajay had taken some more time to come back.......................

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    1. Ya looks like every one wishing the same
      Thanks for dropping by Kalpana

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  5. Love the twist in the story, Afshan and a case of unrequited love and he didn't had time to express his love to her. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
    Cheers
    Vishal

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  6. I'm very curious... think about expanding this to tell the full story.

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    1. :) :) haha lets think for the next prompt
      thanks kalpanaa

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  7. Oh wow, I would love to pick his brain and find out what he is thinking!!! What is he smiling about? I have come across men from my past that gave me the same reaction and I just wanted to kick the answers out of them. It was maddening! LOL Brilliant write!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. BINGO on that Kathy . I have come across weird men too and they say reading a woman's mind is tough . MEN R TOUGHEST Nuts
      thanks for reading dear

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  8. Loved the intrigue and the open ending Afshan.

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  9. If only we could look into his mind ... so Afshan we'll look forward to part 2 when we get to look into his mind. Thanks for writing on my prompt.

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    1. ya if only minds cud be read ;) so much easy than decoding the smiles :)
      Thanks for givign this wonderful prompt suzy

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  10. Liked it! But curious to know more...!!

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    1. me too ! lets think if I get any spicy thoughts ;)

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    1. Phir kya vahi hua jo har kahani me hota hai - the end :P

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  12. So much history and so little time. Nice job on the cliffhanger.

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    1. Haha
      Thank you damayanti
      Thanks for visiting my blog

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  13. I hope Reshma has leads a happy life ahead.

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    1. I too hope so
      Thanks for comment Diana

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