It got awkward when Reshma was introduced to
Sahil. She already knows him but had to exchange the pleasantries like she met
him for the first time. To add to the awkwardness Ajay left her with Sahil as
he got a phone call.
Sahil: "Hmm. So you seem very happy?"
Reshma: "Of course. Ajay is a good man but I have not embraced life the way you did. I didn't climb the success ladder forgetting past so fast!"
Sahil: "Hmm. So you seem very happy?"
Reshma: "Of course. Ajay is a good man but I have not embraced life the way you did. I didn't climb the success ladder forgetting past so fast!"
Sahil smiled. The shadow of his
smile held so many questions, answers and emotions but it was disrupted as Ajay
came back.
Written for Saturday’s 100 words prompt on Write Tribe.
Written for Saturday’s 100 words prompt on Write Tribe.
Huh! You cannot leave a reader at a cliff like that :(
ReplyDeleteI will hold u wen u r at the edge of cliff ;) hehe bad joke
DeleteYa 100 words me itna hi hosaka :P
Thanku for not letting my fall :) <3
Deleteooopsie.. I meant letting me fall :P
DeleteOh!! Why did Ajay came back so early!!
ReplyDeleteGood one, Afshan! Liked it! :)
ya if only some one stopped him we wud hav known more :)
Deletethanks shilpa
Liked it... hope she recreates her new world carefully
ReplyDeleteWish Ajay had taken some more time to come back.......................
ReplyDeleteYa looks like every one wishing the same
DeleteThanks for dropping by Kalpana
Love the twist in the story, Afshan and a case of unrequited love and he didn't had time to express his love to her. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteCheers
Vishal
ya thanks for reading vishal :)
DeleteI'm very curious... think about expanding this to tell the full story.
ReplyDelete:) :) haha lets think for the next prompt
Deletethanks kalpanaa
Oh wow, I would love to pick his brain and find out what he is thinking!!! What is he smiling about? I have come across men from my past that gave me the same reaction and I just wanted to kick the answers out of them. It was maddening! LOL Brilliant write!
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
BINGO on that Kathy . I have come across weird men too and they say reading a woman's mind is tough . MEN R TOUGHEST Nuts
Deletethanks for reading dear
Loved the intrigue and the open ending Afshan.
ReplyDeleteThanks alka :)
DeleteLiked it! But curious to know more...!!
ReplyDeleteme too ! lets think if I get any spicy thoughts ;)
DeletePhir kya hua, Afshan?
ReplyDeletePhir kya vahi hua jo har kahani me hota hai - the end :P
DeleteSo much history and so little time. Nice job on the cliffhanger.
ReplyDeleteHaha
DeleteThank you damayanti
Thanks for visiting my blog
I hope Reshma has leads a happy life ahead.
ReplyDeleteI too hope so
DeleteThanks for comment Diana